Saturday, April 22, 2006

The Cisneros Pastiche

I assigned two of my classes to write a Santra Cisneros pastiche - five vignettes written in a minimalist, yet poetic, style akin to Cisneros. There are a few other requirements, as well:

* Child or adolescent narrator
* Use of ten metaphors, similes, or personifications
* Use of at least two symbols
* Direct emulation of at least one of Cisneros' vignettes (such as "My Name")
* Address at least one social problem in one of the vignettes
* Use of humor
* Imagery to all five senses

I read through the first draft of many of the students' on Friday. Some are so good that I got goosebumps, and I swear that some are even publishable. They really are amazing. I can't believe it's taken me five years of teaching to figure out that House on Mango Street is the book that will produce the best student writing imaginable.

The project has gotten me so excited that I want to get all the vignettes together from all the students, and run them off in bound versions for all the kids at Kinko's. I would not imagine that this would set me back too much, and I think the memento that the kids would get would be something that they would keep for a long time.

One of my classes is pressuring me to write my own vignettes, because I let slip that I'd never written one. I wrote my first one this afternoon. They're hard! I mean, they're sort of easy to write, but it's hard as hell to make them good. I might post a couple here sometime soon for feedback before I "publish" the class sets at Kinko's.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

E -

Ran into a restaurant colleague of yours tonight at a dinner, who remembered you fondly and said she would write to you.

You ever consider putting together a blog for your students to contribute to? They could publish their vignettes there....

Love the site. Glad the OB trip is funded.

- G

Epiphany in Baltimore said...

Who did you run into? At least give me a hint...

I've thought briefly about incorporating some sort of blog activity into my teaching, but many of my students do not have access to technology or the Internet and the school system blocks all blogging sites.

Anonymous said...

Sheila the Tuesday night Diva...

Could they blog from the library? I haven't tried to use the web at the Pratt libraries because there's always a lot of kids around....

Best -

G

Sayler said...

Would it be possible to get the assignment and an example? I would like my students to do this!
saylerr@tcis.or.kr